Very cool job *_*

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I think the use of green in the cell is very effective and unusual. It's relevent to the Spring theme and gives colour to the picture without being too bright and overwhelming. The text is also very nice, though rather hard to read. Try making it a little bolder with darker colours. The realistic picture in the background is very contrasting and looks slightly artificial, maybe make it a bit darker or hand draw it. Overall, very nice and original.

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I like the lighting.
the tree outside looks too much like a photo and doesn't fit in with the rest of the image.
nice concept.

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I like the idea and the text plus the colours are simply gorgeous. Of the four different versions I like the one in the lower right corner best, but I would consider combining them to yet another version (though this is just my personal taste so don't feel obliged to follow these ideas).
The part behind the window looks best in the lower left picture with just a little more colour. I think its' too bright in the others so something in between would be great. When I look outside my window right now, the sky is more of a pale blue than the turquoise you used in the other pictures.
The colours of the cell look best in the lower right picture to me. The cell looks really damp and mossy there and feels cold and dirty. Great work on the structure and detail!
I also like the rays of light best in that picture. I don't like them at all in the both left ones since the sun would have to be directly above the cell and would not create these kinds of shadows. One, they don't really line up with the bars of the window and second they would not stay so sharp in the distance from the window. So I would take the sunrays from the lower right corner and paint in some dark shadows right behind the bars and let them fade out in the distance.
And lastly I would choose the writing and logo of the upper left picture.

Well that's just my opinion. All in all I really like the concept and execution, the guy looks really lonely and sad, his posture really speaks for itself.

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I'm glad you like the lighting, I lost a lot of time for it. ^_^
And the tree outside is truly a photo. I tried hard, but.. yeah, it doesn't fit in with the image. Next time, I will try to do something better.

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Thanks you so much for your feedback. You're right, maybe I should hand draw the background. T_T

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"though this is just my personal taste so don't feel obliged to follow these ideas" Although you said that but I must say: "Thank you so much for your long feed back!" I thought there wasn't any people would view all of the versions of this pic but you came and view all carefully. I'm so happy because of it. I put my heart and my soul, also my time into my art, and I'm glad there's someone view it carefully and can give me feed back to make it better. Thank you again.


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You're welcome, I'm glad to hear that. It's obvious that you put a lot of time and effort into this so I tried to give you some feedback while still appreciating your work. In the end it comes down to what you like and what you think suits your idea best, but maybe I could help you with a different opinion or different ideas

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